Construction Management research paper -dissertation
Hello, I have a research paper which is almost complete however it needs to be amended and i have the feedback from the lecturer on what needs to be improved. the research paper title is A Better Engagement Between the Construction Site and The Community in the UK files are attached I attach some comments and suggestions. You have quite a bit to do. Importantly do get the overall argument sorted out and make this clear and well explained. I have tried to help with abstract and aims and objectives. Read these and change them to be what you want. Watch that you actually do what you say. Please use the interviews in the text otherwise you are just doing a literature review. This would not be good enough. Do come to a clearer conclusion (you need to state this in the abstract) Please cut out much of the superfluous material. As ever please try to get this proof read and the english corrected.
