Abdussamet,
I have to say I’m very upset in your first draft and it feels as if your rushed to submit it final night time after 11 PM. Listed here are my ideas:
On the duvet slide Lockheed is misspelled as Locked. You didn’t put your identify, my identify, or the course info on the slide.
I’d recommend utilizing the Lockheed Martin brand on the duvet slide to make it extra fascinating and contemplate the usage of coloration to brighten up the slides.
You didn’t present the required background info on the corporate nor a transparent assertion of the governmental problem it faces for this project.
You didn’t present a transparent suggestion/s for Enterprise venture groups.
Abdussamet,
I have to say I’m very upset in your first draft and it feels as if your rushed to submit it final night time after 11 PM. Listed here are my ideas:
On the duvet slide Lockheed is misspelled as Locked. You didn’t put your identify, my identify, or the course info on the slide.
I’d recommend utilizing the Lockheed Martin brand on the duvet slide to make it extra fascinating and contemplate the usage of coloration to brighten up the slides.
You didn’t present the required background info on the corporate nor a transparent assertion of the governmental problem it faces for this project.
You didn’t present a transparent suggestion/s for Enterprise venture groups.
You gave me 5 slides on Communications, however I do not see any clear suggestions and there are a number of redundant bullet factors?
What are you clear suggestions for mitigation options for the “unnamed” governmental problem from level three above.
three slides on political affect and never one clear suggestion for the group, in gentle of, the problem (level three above).
We are able to focus on my issues after class tomorrow if you want any clarification on my issues. I will be ready to handle any particular questions you will have and bear in mind to submit your closing slide presentation by, or earlier than Sunday, April 10th.
What are you clear suggestions for mitigation options for the “unnamed” governmental problem from level three above.
three slides on political affect and never one clear suggestion for the group, in gentle of, the problem (level three above).
We are able to focus on my issues after class tomorrow if you want any clarification on my issues. I will be ready to handle any particular questions you will have and bear in mind to submit your closing slide presentation by, or earlier than Sunday, April 10th.
slides will probably be 30 pages
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Abdussamet,
I have to admit that I’m actually dissatisfied in your first draft, which seems to have been rushed and submitted late final night time after 11 p.m. Listed here are a few of my ideas:
Lockheed is misspelled as Locked on the duvet slide. You didn’t embody your, my, or the course particulars on the slide.
To make the duvet slide extra engaging, I’d suggest incorporating the Lockheed Martin emblem and contemplating the usage of coloration to brighten up the shows.
You failed to supply the mandatory background info on the corporate, in addition to a transparent Assessment of the governmental concern it faces for this activity.
You didn’t make any particular suggestions for Enterprise venture groups.
I have to say, Abdussamet, I’m fairly impressed.
