You received the following message via email from your supervisor. After reviewing the message, identify one change from the list below that you would make and thoroughly explain why you would make that change.
Word Choice
Tone
Subject Line
Subject Line: Stop Working Overtime NOW!
Message:
Hey,
When I reviewed this week’s timesheets I saw that way too many people worked overtime. This is costing our company too much money and needs to immediately stop. Going forward, before you work overtime, you must get approval from your supervisor.
Thanks,
Supervisor John
Remember to answer each part of the question with a minimum of one paragraph that is 5-7 sentences with limited grammatical errors. Also, respond to at least one of your peers with one 5-7 sentence paragraph.
Your supervisor sent you the following message via email. After analyzing the message, choose one change from the list below that you would make and explain why.
Words of Advice
Tone
Subject Heading
Subject Line: IMMEDIATELY STOP WORKING OVERTIME!
Message:
Hey,
When I looked over the timesheets for this week, I noticed that far too many employees had worked overtime. This is wasting too much money for our organization and must be stopped quickly. Going forward, before you work overtime, you must get approval from your supervisor.
Thanks,
Supervisor John
Remember to answer each part of the question with a minimum of one paragraph that is 5-7 sentences with limited grammatical errors. Also, respond to at least one of your peers with one 5-7
